Now I'm going to talk you about the computers and about the modern times. Are the computers necessary to our lives?
On the one hand, I think that we can find the information quickly with Internet. Also, the technology industry gives work to a lot of people.
But, on the other hand, I think that there are a lot of people that have "technologydependence", that the first thing that they do when they arrive at home is turning on the computer, or the Play Station 2, Play Station 3, Play Station Portable and other ones.
I also think that we don't need tecnology to survive, it isn't a need. The society makes it a need.
It's true that it gives work to many people and because of that nobody wants to be a farmer and we need farmers, because they provide us the raw material that we need tu survive.
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Hi Ariadna, good writing, the only thing missing is the introduction, please add it!! a statement, question, expression, idiom, quote...don't begin the composition with a connector like on the one hand
You can delete this comment after correcting the essay!!
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